For the freaking month that was badly stained w/ red, yellow & black, my written-elegy would be this. A piece I once submitted to, and well-mused by poetic members of the Pinoy Penster Community.
Chew its surreal over, relish the gist after, AND: Fret not.
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Chew its surreal over, relish the gist after, AND: Fret not.
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Pagkagat ng takipsilim sa paligid
Malaniyebeng hangin ng Langit nangunyapit
Kidlat at Kulog kaduelo ng ulan at takot
Malaimpaktong sugo ng nakangising Diablo
Dinaluhong ispirito ng santong kabayo’t aso
Sa halip na makitawa ka,
pakinggan pahiwatig nya
.
Litrato ng balisang kapwa mo
Makapigil hininga, makapanindig balahibo
Pagkatao’t hwisyo winasiwas ng mga delubyo
May kaluluwa namang maari pang isalba
Habang may ulirat, abutin sugatang puso nya
Sa balon ng kabaliwa’t kamatayan agawin sya
Malaniyebeng hangin ng Langit nangunyapit
Kidlat at Kulog kaduelo ng ulan at takot
Malaimpaktong sugo ng nakangising Diablo
Dinaluhong ispirito ng santong kabayo’t aso
Sa halip na makitawa ka,
pakinggan pahiwatig nya
.
Litrato ng balisang kapwa mo
Makapigil hininga, makapanindig balahibo
Pagkatao’t hwisyo winasiwas ng mga delubyo
May kaluluwa namang maari pang isalba
Habang may ulirat, abutin sugatang puso nya
Sa balon ng kabaliwa’t kamatayan agawin sya
.
Pagpupugay sa naimbentong titik
Ipit na hinagpis sa papel naiuukit
Luha sa nakamaskarang mukha
Dahil sa tula, pagdurusa malayang naiwika
Paglipas ng gabing tinigib ng magarbong unos
Bahaghari nawa'y umarko sa pagtatapos
Ipit na hinagpis sa papel naiuukit
Luha sa nakamaskarang mukha
Dahil sa tula, pagdurusa malayang naiwika
Paglipas ng gabing tinigib ng magarbong unos
Bahaghari nawa'y umarko sa pagtatapos
13 comments:
"simply powerful...made me want to grab a buddy while reading your post. "
ok ito...nakadalo ka ba ng mga workshop"? -
hello AJ, your avid fan is here...talented kay ka ah...grvehh.
at sa muli...iyong tagahanga..HONEY
uy, me pagka poetic ka pala
@barabbas & ving:my pleasure to b ur bud, sir B,..workshop? never been..but penster did inspired me a lot..and yes, what i saw around..
@honey: txs for being my No. 1 online bud..peeps like u, i am boost to write anything under the sun all the more..
@abou: AJ's just a wannabe poetic, man.
Wow..lalim ah.. ano to hidden talent or naturally born poet ikaw? galing naman.. sana me din ganito kapoetic.. :] cge fan mo na din ako from now on.. hehehehe
@twinkle: practice lang po..and siempre passion for the words..im not really into poems and poetries esp tagalog..but thanks that u appreciate. im ur fan, too :)
hi! nice poem...and tagalog at that!
Thanks for dropping by my blog..appreciate it much.
wow, nice play of words.
hindi ako naka detach kaagad. husay!
@naomi:thank u that u appreciate my Tagalog experimental work..
@WC:good to see u again:)..its the pain in the poem that touches ones senses all the more..
napakagandang tula..
bravo...bravo..
sana marami pa teka.. ha at nanakawin ko lang ang yong tula.. :)maipost sa aking munting blog.
have a nice day..
@ lestat: salamat, salamat bruder..
got lot of this..kaya lang kalokohan ung iba..and sure, grab it, my pleasure!:)
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